Proposal feedback

Our proposal was fedback with these issues and we sorted them out accordingly:

• The Idea is perhaps too convoluted for an A level production
• In two minuiets there is too much to put across (love intrest, home life, autism etc.)
• The storyboard contains too much.
• The crazy transitions we want, although they have been tested, may be too confusing
• love the major plot idea however
• really like the setting and actors